Unabashed fault lines

dipping with excess,
the mistakes are glaring.
surely you did not forget to punctuate
?
of course not,
that would be wrong.
how about accentuate     ?
REALLY!
need that be necessary?
how about Capitalize?
you know beginnings are important,
and so are names.
okay, so you’ve managed so far.
but does it make sense?
did you reread what you wrote,
and edit yourself?
heck no… should i?
Yes, you really should!
okay, i will do so next time.
until then, i’ll try to lessen
the faults to which many are lost.

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